The first rhyme that I thought should really be revised is:
 
PIGGY ON THE RAILROAD
 
Piggy on the railway, picking up stones.
Along came an engine and broke piggy's bones.

"Oh" said piggy, "That's not fair."
"Oh" said the driver, "I don't care."
 
I'm not really sure what kind of lesson this rhyme is trying to teach
- Unfairness
- Lack of Empathy/Disregard for life?
 
 
Thus, I'd revise this one as:
 
PIGGY ON THE RAILROAD(May 2008)
 
Piggy on the railway, picking up stones.
Along came an engine with a dog and his bones.

"Oh" said Piggy, "That's not fair."
"Oh" said the driver, "The dog will share."
 
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LADY IN PINK (June 2008)

This next rhyme is a dedication to the sisters(nurses) of the Maternity ward at Lilavati Hospital in Bandra, Mumbai.

These ladies made it a lot easier for me to transition into parenthood through all the TLC that they gave my baby during all his needs. The sisters all dressed in Pink outfits took care of all of baby's needs and the babies really love them there due to all the pampering that they received.

 
O' Lady in Pink. I can't sleep a wink
Of warm milk I think. Please bring me my drink

I start to blink, hearing your footsteps clink
Into deep sleep I will sink, O' Lady in Pink

This rhyme is meant to be the thoughts of a hungry baby who is longing for the nurse to take him away and feed him his formula. Just as the baby hears the nurse approaching, he fades off into sleep again .... already contented knowing he will be taken care of
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